Sleeping Valor

~Turn right at the next main intersection.~ Marge said. "You should turn right at the next main intersection." Wanda repeated aloud. "My body isn't in that direction." Keith informed her. ...

^_^ I seem to have first comment yet again. I didn't see too many errors (in fact I don't remember any as the moment), unless we're stalking phrase structure in ...

Hmmm, on good weeks when I have time, I can read as much as 1.5 books a day (as in holidays when I have nothing else to do) and on ...

Actually Jabber, I really appreciate your review. As must as I bask in all the positive feedback, I know because of the keyboard I had when I was writing it, ...

Reading books written by other people will only help you get a feel for the genre and maybe inspire you, but it might not be as helpful for helping you ...

Silly goose, go read the PROLOGUE. It's the longer version.

OOc: Hey Kyte, you didn't answer my questions about how the actual fighting works (second post). =P IC: Yuna heard the gates open, but didn't feel anxious she was missing ...

If you're trying to come up with a plot, I'd do a word bank. Think up a list of words that relate to the story, images or concepts you want ...

Cool. Very cool. He still stood at the doorway, the door he had slammed in her face , now the only thing he saw through his confused eyes. Everything was ...

Woot! The prologue is complete ! *hugs all her readers* You guys are too awesome! Check down at the bottom for some feedback questions! If you haven't read this yet, ...

It seemed clear to me. =P But maybe I guess for those people who can't connect the dots without little numbers ot guide them, then maybe you'd have to. My ...

^_^ Much much better. Still quite interesting too. =P So looks like I skipped commenting on 3, it was good as well though. My mind is kind of blank lately, ...

=P It's actually not, but villains tend to do bad things so it seems that way. She isn't scared because in rality both her parents were bad guys so she's ...

(well Yeah, but be could have robbbed the bank while he had his temporary powers. =P) =P The title was the orginal reason I kept skipping past your story, and ...

Well then I'll just have to keep readng because I really do want to know what chocolat has to do with all of this. (and if he has super powers, ...